©Gast
Di Jan 29 2019, 15:31  Gast
![-:}-[Golden Heartspeeches]-{:- Empty](https://2img.net/i/fa/empty.gif) | Willkommen, Gast! Da ich sehr an Poetrie interessiert bin, schreibe ich natürlich auch ab und an meine eigenen Gedichte! Es gibt nicht viel dazu zu sagen, also: - The Ghosts Of The Lethal Town:
Deep inside the woods of hallow
Between the rocks and trees so hollow
Over the water surface, o so shallow
There is a town
A town so small, innocent, and still
Waters flowing, risen up to the hill
The peaceful air once stroke to kill
The ones with crown
Today, the ghosts haunting the homes
Tortured in those believers' domes
Rest underground inside the loams
Leaving life to be
A young maid of wood and thorns
A woman of lesser good with scorns
Steps over graves, even the one that mourns
Takes no turn to flee
Into the night, into the unknown, she wanders
Her mind, it races, she travels, she ponders
Once arrived, the mist rose and she wonders
Will this breath be my last?
High up the billion eyes stare down at her
Black cats stroke her legs and purr
A ghostly figure appears and lets her lure
The dead and stare aghast
The lonely town inside the woods
It gives them terror and us the goods
All the crimes and fears it hoods
A mystery indeed
At night we sing and howl
While they scream and yowl
Through our town we prowl
No one shall ever plead
- The Shadow Monster Man And You:
Tipping, creaking, stumbling through to you
Shadow monster man creeps up and gives a coo
Whispers, hushes, hisses in your ear
Quiet, quiet, nobody will ever hear
You gasp and fight and kick and scream
Thee think to yourself, you think and deem
Shadow monster man we all shall hail
Immortality he'll give to our souls so frail
Yet we worship stars and myths, the lies
Shadow monster man we anger, he holds the skies
You kick and scream, try to break free
But independence wasn't for thee
Under one-eyes' stalk you try and hide
But thee cannot escape his deadly bride
The water now creeps to your throat
He pulls you under black sea's coat
Lethal arms now embrace your flesh
You reach and long for a life afresh
But shadow monster man has given up on you
Thus you die and rot inside ocean's blackest blue
- Diamond's Thief Of Moonlight's Call:
Twisting and snarling
Flipping and crawling
Hissing and grumbling
Yowling and rumbling
Deep down, deep inside
Sitting down as he cried
Cried out, cried out for love to come
"He's here, he's here to get me some!"
Whistling a whisper, screaming a song
There's a shadow and wind, so strong
Humbling, humbling they all speak
But only his words are unique
Search it, search it deep down below
In the caves of truths that are unknown
A piece of quarz, an infinite string
The thousand stars, they howl, they sing
The string is the connector
The stone the reflector
Running down the river's stream
Into the skies, to heaven's gleam
But down here, down here he sits and whines
Begging for love and bread and wine
Fell from the clouds to pay for his crimes
While they play for him, the chimes, the chimes
Ich habe eigentlich noch ein paar mehr, aber ich denke das sollte für's erste reichen. 'Tschuldung dass die alle auf Englisch sind ^^" Ich mag die Sprache aber voll und finde es klingt so schöner! Ich bin immer für Kritik offen! Herzliche Grüße, Jay
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©Gast
Do Feb 14 2019, 14:45 Gast
| Hey^^
Ich finde deine Gedichte echt schön und berührend. Besonders das du sie auf Englisch geschrieben hast finde ich hat schonmal großen Respekt verdient denn das kann auch nicht jeder. Ich finde auch das Englisch einfach die Sprache der Dichtkunst ist, das ist aber geschmackssache^^
Mach weiter so :3
- Karina
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©Gast
Do Feb 14 2019, 18:34 Gast
| [Sie müssen registriert oder eingeloggt sein, um diesen Link sehen zu können] Dankeschön! Ich stimme dir, was die Sprache angeht, eindeutig zu! Englisch ist, meiner Meinung nach, eine deutlich poetischere Sprache als Deutsch. Einige mögen mir nicht zustimmen, aber ich finde das stimmt schon xP __________________________________________________________________________________ - The Littlest Star:
High up in the starlit sky
Our ancestors, they dance and fly
Our future beings join in with them
They laugh, they sing like gems
Big and weak, small and strong
They know and never prove one wrong
They all will be and all have been
Bonded together, they're all akin
Down here on earth, we fight and sin
Equality, liberty, all lost in our din
In all the noise and love and hate
One tries to live and hope for fate
Yet one cannot escape the chains we made
One has to stay where once was played.
High up in the starlit sky
Creatures sing and sing and cry
For one small being had escaped
A being so perfectly, endlessly shaped
Littlest ears and biggest eyes
Looking up as they adjust the skies
The meadow on the lowest hills
Still seeing the brightest wills
Shutting out all the noise
Opening up for the whisps of choice
A little kitten in the high, soft grass
Hidden deeply while escaping trauma's grasp
Darkest times have always past
Goodest moments will forever last
Kitten does not remember any good
Yet stands up to skies and understood
Lovely mysteries not to be found
Knowledge that gave kitten stars' bound
They look down at little one
Whilest kitten sinks down now to be done
Such big choices and smaller too
Can bring us life, the endings true
Small, soft breath and smiling at the moon
The little one will join them soon
A frame so small and yet so bright
Will now light up the darkest night
A spark of hope in our hearts
When our lives will start
Littlest star will never leave your bones
Littlest star, you're not alone.
Herzliche Grüße, Jay
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